LadyButterfly she/her@piefed.blahaj.zoneM to NiceMemes@sopuli.xyzEnglish · 11 days agoPerfectionpiefed.cdn.blahaj.zoneimagemessage-square8fedilinkarrow-up1175
arrow-up1175imagePerfectionpiefed.cdn.blahaj.zoneLadyButterfly she/her@piefed.blahaj.zoneM to NiceMemes@sopuli.xyzEnglish · 11 days agomessage-square8fedilink
minus-squaree_chao@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up15·11 days agoIf you remove the "wait"s and move “just” to between “ocean” and “visiting,” it’s a haiku.
minus-squaretoothpaste_sandwich@thebrainbin.orglinkfedilinkarrow-up13·11 days agoRain is the ocean just visiting the mountains and then going home again
minus-squarefakeman_pretendname@feddit.uklinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up6·edit-211 days agoDepending on your accent, you might have to knock that “and” or “again” off the end too.
minus-squaretoothpaste_sandwich@thebrainbin.orglinkfedilinkarrow-up19·11 days agoRain is the ocean just visiting the mountains and then going home Yeah, better. Really a pretty good haiku, isn’t it?
minus-squarefleem@piefed.zeromedia.viplinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up2·11 days agoinstructions unclear, getting pruny in the ocean
If you remove the "wait"s and move “just” to between “ocean” and “visiting,” it’s a haiku.
Rain is the ocean
just visiting the mountains
and then going home again
Depending on your accent, you might have to knock that “and” or “again” off the end too.
Rain is the ocean
just visiting the mountains
and then going home
Yeah, better. Really a pretty good haiku, isn’t it?
instructions unclear, getting pruny in the ocean