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If you remove the "wait"s and move “just” to between “ocean” and “visiting,” it’s a haiku.
Rain is the ocean
just visiting the mountains
and then going home againDepending on your accent, you might have to knock that “and” or “again” off the end too.
Rain is the ocean
just visiting the mountains
and then going homeYeah, better. Really a pretty good haiku, isn’t it?
instructions unclear, getting pruny in the ocean
Snow is it being clingy
Piss is also just water from the ocean visiting my body and going back home again UwU
The water being is one and many, it takes many different forms in the air and in the soil, it can be gentle or destructive.
